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2010年4月24日 星期六

Neruda's Oda a la papa (Ode to the papa 薯仔頌)1

Although there are very few people in this world who has never once tasted potato puree, French fries, baked potato with cream or yogurt or potato salad, but not every one knows that the potato had been cultivated around Lake Titicaca, between Peru and Bolivia about 10,000 years ago and that specimens of it have been discovered in some caves called Tres Ventanas (Thee Windows) in Chilca about 65 KM south of Lima and had been dated to more than 8000 years BC!  Together with the maize, the potato was the staple of the Incas. The potato was first introduced to Spain in the 16th Century with the discovery of America  and has since spread to France , Germany , England . There are more than  3,000 varieties of potato in Peru , its place of origin! I have already translated Neruda's Oda a las papa fritas. But I just discovered another one on the potato itself. It is much much longer and has  not yet been fried! Here it is with my translations.


Oda a la papa                                 Ode to the papa                             薯仔頌


Papa                                                    Papa                                                   薯仔      


te llamas,                                             you're called                                       你叫


Papa                                                    Papa                                                   薯仔


y no patata,                                          and not potato,                                   而不是馬鈐薯,


no naciste con barba,                           you were not born with a beard,          你出生時沒有鬍鬚,


no eres castellana:                                you are not a Castilian:                         你不是加士廸人:


eres oscura                                           you are dark                                         你黝黑


como                                                    like                                                      


nuestra piel,                                          our skin,                                              我們皮膚,


somos americanos,                                we are americans,                                 我們是美洲人,


Papa,                                                     Papa,                                                    薯仔


somos indios.                                        we are indigenous.                                我們是土著。


Profunda                                               You are                                                 你是


y suave eres,                                          deep and delicate.                                  深藏不露和細緻


pulpa, pura, purísima                             pure pulp, purest                                   漿極純


rosa blanca                                            white rose                                               白玫瑰


enterra,                                                  buried,                                                    埋藏地下


floresces                                                 you flourish                                            你在哪開花


allá adentro                                            there within                                             在泥土


en la tierra,                                             the earth,                                                 


en tu lluviosa                                          in your rainy                                           在你滿灌雨水的


tierra                                                       orginal                                                    


originaria,                                               soil,                                                         


en las islas mojadas                                 in the drenched islands                             在風雨中智利


de Chile tempestuoso,                             of tempestuous Chile,                              濕漉漉之眾孤島   


en Chiloé marino,                                   in the maritime Chiloe,                            在海邊的歌拉魯爾


en medio de la esmeralda que abre          amidst the emerald which sheds               在那向南洋   


su luz verde                                             its green light                                           裸露其綠光的


sobre el austral océano.                           over the southern ocean                            翡翠中。


 


Papa,                                                       Papa                                                          薯仔


materia                                                    sweet                                                         甜絲絲的


dulce,                                                      material,                                                    物料


alemendra                                                the almond                                                大地


de                                                            of                                                               


la tierra,                                                   the earth,                                                    扁桃


la madre                                                  the mother                                                  在那兒


allí                                                           there                                                           母親


no tuvo                                                    didn't have                                                  沒有


metal muerto,                                           deadly metal,                                              可置死的金屬


allí en la oscura                                        there in the shadowy                                   在那兒


suavidad de las islas                                 softness of the islands,                                 在孤島幽暗之温柔中


no dispuso                                               you didn't handle                                        沒有


el cobre y sus volcanes                             copper and its submerged                           銅和潛藏的


sumergidos,                                             volcanoes,                                                   火山


ni la crueldad azul                                    nor the cruel blue                                        亦沒有錳那


del manganeso,                                         of manganese,                                             綠色的無情


sino que con su mano,                              but with its hands,                                        你以手


como en un nido                                       as in a nest                                                   猶如在鳥窩


en la humedad más suave,                         in a softer humidity,                                     更温柔的濕潤中


colocó tus redomas,                                  you placed your roundabouts,                      疏理你的迥旋處


y cuando                                                   and when                                                     而當


el trueno                                                    the thunder                                                  黑色


de la guerra                                               of the black                                                  


negra,                                                        war,                                                             


España                                                       inquisitive                                                    西班牙的


inquisidora,                                                Spain.                                                           好奇


negra como águila de sepultura,                 black as a sepulcral eagle,                             黑如墓穴之鷹


buscó el oro salvaje                                    found the savage gold                                   在亞拉鳥干尼亞


en la matriz                                                 in the burning                                               那熾熱


quemante                                                    womb                                                           子宮


de la Araucanía ,                                          of Araucania,                                                尋找那兇狠的黃金


sus uñas                                                       their greedy                                                  他們貪婪的


codiciosas                                                    fingers                                                          手指


fueron extermindas,                                     were killed,                                                   被截,


sus capitanes,                                               their captains,                                                他們的上校,


muertos,                                                       dead,                                                             死去,


pero cuando a las piedras de Castilla            but when they returned                                  但當他們重返


regresaron                                                    to the rocks of Castile                                    加士廸的亂石時


los pobres capitanes derrotados,           the poor defeated captains,                                     那些戰敗的可憐上校,


levantaron en las manos sangrientas   lifted in their bloody hands,                                     升起在他們血染之手中的


no una copa de oro                              not a cup of gold                                                   不是金杯


sino la papa                                          but the potato                                                         而是歌拉魯爾海旁的


de Chiloé marino.                                of maritime Chiloe .                                                 薯仔。


 


(To be continued)


2010年4月22日 星期四

Neruda's Oda a la manzana (Ode to the Apple 蘋果之頌)

Apple is one of the commonest fruit in Europe. In fact, it is so common that many other fruits or vegetables are called apples by analogy. Thus potatoes when first introduced to Europe was called by the French "pomme de terre" or "earth apples" and when the tomato was first introduced to Europe, they were called "pomme d'amour"  or "love apple" and dates were called "thorn apples" and oranges were called "Chinese apples" or "golden apple"  Therefore for a people's poet like Neruda, it is not at all surprising that he should write about this colourful, juicy, munchy and nutritious fruit. So here's Neruda's Oda a la manzana with my translations.

 

Oda a la manzana              Ode to the Apple                          蘋果之頌

 

A ti, manzana,                               To you, apple                     蘋果,為了你,

quiero celebrarte                           I'd like to celebrate you   我望能

llenandome                                    filling                                   滿口

con tu nombre                               my mouth                           你名字時

la boca,                                          with your name                   吃你

comiéndote.                                  eating you.                          以祝賀你

 

Siempre                                          Always                                你常

eres nueva como nada                you're new like nothing     那麽新

o nadie,                                          or nobody,                          無比或無人可比,

siempre                                           always                                 永像

recién caída                                    newly fallen                        剛從樂園

del Paraiso:                                     from Paradise                     掉下:

¡ plena                                             full                                        豐盈  

y pura                                             and pure                               純潔

mejilla arrebolada                          cheeks reddened                 頰染

de la aurora!                                   by dawn clouds!                 晨霞。 

 

Qué dificiles                                   How difficult                        大地

son                                                  are                                          之果

comparados                                   the fruits of the earth          如何

contigo                                           compared                               與你

los frutos de la tierra,                    to you,                                   相 比,

las celulares uvas,                         the cellular grapes,               細胞般的萄葡,

los mangos                                     the gloomy                             黯然的

tenebrosos,                                     mangos.,                                芒果,

las huesadas                                   the bony                                骨慼的

ciruelas, los higos                          plums, the underwater         鳥梅,潛水的 

submarinos:                                    figs:                                         無花果:  

tú eres pomada pura,                     you are pure cream,              你純是膏,

pan fragrante,                                 fragrant bread,                       香包

queso                                              vegetarian                               素

de la vegetación.                            cheese.                                   乳酪。

Cuando mordemos                        When we bite                        我們牙齒 

tu redonda inocencia                    your round innocence          啃下你圓渾之天真時

volvemos                                        we return                                 那刻

por un instante                              for a moment                           我們亦

a ser                                                 to being                                   變回

también recién creadas criaturas: also recently created creatures:  剛造之被造物:

aún tenemos algo de manzana.   we already partake something of the apple.   我們已化作蘋果。

 

Yo quiero                                        I like                                          我樂見

una abundancia                             an abundance                          一全面的

total, la multiplicación                   total, the multiplciation          豐收,你家族的

de tu familia,                                   of your family.                         繁衍, 

quiero                                               I'd like                                         我樂見

una ciudad                                       a city                                        一城市,

una república,                                  a republic,                               一共和國,

un río Mississipi                             a Mississipi river                   一密西西比河的

de manzanas,                                   of apples.                                蘋果,

y en sus orillas                                and upon your shores         在他們岸旁

quiero ver                                         I'd like to see                          我樂見

a toda la población                         all the population                  普世

del mundo                                        of the world                            人民

unida, reunida,                                 united, re-united,                   團聚,重聚

en el acto más simple de la tierra:  in the simplest act of the Earth:  於至單一之行動:

mordiendo una manzana.               eating an apple.                      啃蘋果。

 

To Neruda, the apple is not just a fruit. It is also associated, as Chile is a catholic country, with the Biblical story of the "forbidden fruit", the fruit of the tree of knowledge, which by tradition, is painted as an apple. Hence in deference to this tradition, he refers to it as "recién caída del Paraiso" or " the newly fallen from Paradise". But as a poet, he has he own angle to the apple. He wants to give a new image to the apple as "pomada pura " or "pure cream", "pan fragrante" or "fragrant bread" and "queso de la vegetación" or a cheese of vegetarian origin! His dream is a simple dream: a dream where the peoples of the world are united or reunited by munching that once forbidden fruit: apple. Since the apple is the fruit of the "tree of knowledge", is Neruda suggesting that the people of the world should somehow attain moral knowledge by merging themselves with the qualities of the apple: "plena" or "full/ complete/whole", "pura" or "pure" and with a healthy blood-red colour? As he said, when we sink our teeth into the "innocence" of the apple, we may somehow become recall once more albeit for a brief moment and be identified with its qualities: we become aware once more of our status as a creature instead of being the master of the world and thereby regain a little of the innocence that we lost? To him, there is simply no comparison by any other fruit with the apple. As he says, there is "nada y nadie" or "nothing and nobody" which can hope to compare themselves to the apple. It's simply non-pareil! it is non-pareil because of its biblcal and symbolic significance!

2010年4月21日 星期三

Neruda's Oda al maíz (Ode to the Maize 玉米之頌)

Fourth in the series of Neruda's odes to our kitchen consumables is his Oda al maiz. I have already done his ode to the fried potatoes, onion and tomato. So here it is with my translations.

 

Oda al maiz                                Ode to the Maize                                         玉米之頌

 

América, de un grano                    America, from a grain                                     亞美利加 ,你自

de maíz te elevaste                        of maize, you rose                                          一顆玉米成長

hasta llenar                                  until you fill                                                 直至

de tierras espaciosas                      with spacious earth                                        浪花四濺的

del espumoso                               from the foamy                                             汪洋

océano.                                       ocean.                                                         填滿廣濶的大地

Fue un grano de maíiz tu geografia.  You created geography from a grain of maize      玉米塑造了你的地理。

El grano                                      The grain                                                    種子

adelantó una lanza verde,                advanced with a green lance,                           亮出一綠矛,

la lanza verde se cubrió de oro         the green lance covered itself in gold                 綠矛披上一身黄金 

y engalanó la altura                        and decorated the height                                 替祕魯高地

del Perú con pámpano amarillo.       of Peru with yellow pampas.                           妝上片片蛋黃草原

 

Pero, poeta, deja                            But, poet, leave                                           但,詩人,須把

la historia en su mortaja                  the story in its shroud                                   歷史留給她的壽衣

y alaba con tu lira                           and praise with your lyre                               以七弦琴歌頌

al grano en su graneros:                   the grain in its granaries:                               在糧倉之種子:

canta el simple maiz de las cocinas.   sing the simple maize of the kitchens.              高唱廚房那純樸的玉米。

 

Primero suave barba                        First the smooth beard                                  起初柔軟鬍鬚

agitada en el huerto                         agitates in the garden                                    慫恿着田中

sobre los tiernos dientes                   over the tender teeths                                    穗軸之

de la joven mazoca.                         of the young corncob,                                   嫩芽。

Luego se abrió el estuche                 Later, it opened its case                                 稍後綻開其葉鞘

y la fecundidad rompió sus velos       and fertility broke its veils                             豐沃揭起它蒼白如紙

de palido papiro                             of palid paper                                               的面紗

para que se desgrane                        to disseminate                                             使玉米之笑容 

la risa del maíz sobre la tierra.           the maize's laughter over the land.                  散播大地。

 

A la piedra                                    To a stone                                                  你

en tu viaje, regrasabas.                     in your voyage you regress.                           在旅程中與石塊重蓬。

No a la piedra terrible,                     Not to the terrible stone                                不是墨西哥那可怖

al sanguinario                                 with the bloody                                          血惺

triángulo de la muerte mexicana,        triangle of the Mexican killing,                      三角死亡的石塊

sino a la piedra de moler,                  but to the mill stone,                                   而是在我們厨房

sagrada                                           the sacred                                                  那神聖

piedra de nuestras cocinas.                 stone of our kitchens.                                   磨石。

Alli leche y materia,                         There milk and material.                              在哪牛奶和素材

poderosa y nutrica                            powerful and nutritious                                滿載能量和營養

pulpa de los pasteles                         pulp of our cakes                                         的糕餅漿糊

llegaste a ser movida                         you arrived to be moved                              你抵步後

por milagrosas manos                        by the miraculos hands                               被黑髮女郎

de mujeres morenas.                          of brunettes.                .                             神奇之手揉揑。

 

Donde caigas, maíz,                          Where you fall. maize                                  你倒地之處,玉米,

en la olla ilustre                               in the famous stew                                      在那遐邇馳名的

de las perdices o entre los fréjoles        of the patridges or between the red beans          鷓鴣煲或鄉村紅豆

redempestres, iluminas                      of the coutryside, you light up                       你給食物添上光彩,

la comida y le acercas                        the food and come near                                 並帶出其

el virginal sabor de tu substancia.        the virgin flavor of your substance.                  無玷之香。

 

Morderte,                                           Bite,                                                      咬罷,

panocha de maíz, junto al océano  ear of the maize, close to the ocean                        在那遙遠歌海

de cantata remota y vals profundo.  of remote song and deep waltz.                            和深奧之華爾兹旁的玉米穗。

Hervierte                                           Burn                                                       燃燒罷

y que tu aroma                                  so that your aroma                                      讓你的幽香

por las sierras azules                           may disperse all through                              吹遍

de desplieque.                                   the blue mountains                                      藍山。

 

Pero dónde                                        But where                                                但何處

no llega                                            doesn't your treasure                                   沒有

tu tesoro?                                          reach?                                                     你的瑰寶?

    

En las tierras marinas                         In the seaward                                            在海傍

y calcares,                                        and calceous ,                                             在石灰岩

peladas, en las rocas                            bare lands, in                                             之荒地,

de litoral chileno,                              the Chlean coast,                                         在智利岸邊之群岩,

a la mesa desnuda                              to the naked tableland                                   在鑛工

del minero                                        of the miners                                               一無所有的桌上,

a veces sólo llega                               sometimes you arrive alone                            有時衹得

la claridad de tu mercaderia.                at the brilliance of your merchandise.                你一來貨之光照。

Puebla tu luz, tu harina, tu esperanza,   People your light, your flour, your hope,           使你的光芒,你的麪朌,你的希望        

la soledad de América,                    the loneliness of America,                                  亞美利加的孤獨

y el hambre                                     and hunger                                                    和渴望

considere tus lanzas                         considers your lances                                        視你的長矛為

legiones enemigas.                          enemy legions.                                                敵人之兵團。

 

Entre tu hojas como                       Between your leaves like                                  在你如嬌貴炖肉之

suave guiso                                    delicate stew                                                 葉間

crecieron nuestros graves corazones grew the heavy hearts                                         我們鄉間小孩

de niños provincianos                    of our provincial children                                  沈重的心成長

y comenzó la vida                         and life began to                                              而生命開始

a desgranarios.                              disseminate us.                                               散播。

 

According to historians, the maize is the only cereal unique to South America. It already existed in Mexico about 7,000 years ago but in those days, it was much smaller than it is today, its cob only three to four centimeters in length and 1 centimeter in diameter but before the arrival of Columbus in America, they had already been planted in Chile and had developed between two hundred to thre hundred varieties. It was the staple of the Aztecss, the Incas and the Mayans and had become sarred to them. It was first introduced to Asturias in Spain in 1604 by the then governor of Florida. Today there are about 400 varieties of corn and it is the third most cultivated cereal in the whole world, wheat being the first and rice a close second.The South Americans eat a lot of sweet corn. They grind it down to make flour with which they make all kinds of bread and cakes and they also use it as salads and in all kinds of meat stews including the patridge stew But the most common form the corn is eaten is to use its flour to make a kind of pan cake called the tortilla. 

 

In this poem, Neruda thought that the entire continent of South America is raised on the maize or sweet corn. It is grown from coast to coast and even on the high plains. To him, the shoot of the corn looks like a lance in green and the geography of the continent is a synonym for the the geography of corn. But he is not concerned with history of how the corn came to be grown in America. What is close to his heart is how the corn enriches the diet of the people at the South American kitchen. To him, when the corn is ripe, it breaks open in a big open and sunny smile and that smile is a smile across the whole of the South American continent.  It is literally grown everywhere and in the most unlikely places. It enriches the life of the peasants, the miners and generally the working class people. South Americans eat a lot of sweet corn. They grind it down to make flour with which they make all kinds of bread and cakes and they also use it as salads and in all kinds of meat stews including the patridge stew.To Neruda, the rows and rows of corn growing on South American soil sway in the wind in a kind of "profound" waltz, like so many dancers engaged in rhythmic and graceful movements. But the corn is not just decorative. It provides solid nourishment to the children and not just to their physical body. It nourishes too the children's hope of being free from hunger and being able to grow into healthy adults.  To him, when he thinks of the leaves of the corn, he thinks of the stew on the children's dinner table and of their heavy heart, a heart laden with fear of whether they will survive their hunger so that he may continue to grow into adulthood! And if it dances in the wind, he thinks it dances for life!

 

Neruda has written more than a thousand poems. How did he start writing poetry? I just discovered a tiny fragment written by Neruda on how he came to write his first poem. He said (my translation of an extract from his Confieso que he vivido or Confession that I have lived): "Many times, I have been asked when I wrote my first poem and when the poetry in me was born. I shall try to recall it. Very early in my childhood and hardly had I learned to write, I felt an intense emotion one time and I discovered a number of semi-rhythmic words but they were strange to me, different from daily language . I put them on a clean sheet of paper, felt pressed by a deep sense of worry, of a feeling until then unknown, a kind of anxiety and sadness. It was a poem dedicated to my mother, that is, to her whom I knew as such, an angelic  stepmother whose delicate shadow protected me all through my childhood. Completely unable to judge my first production, I took it to my relatives. They were in the dressing room, submerged in one of their conversations in a low voice which divided the world of the children and that of the adults by more than a river. I stretched the paper out with its lines, tremblingly yet with the first visit of inspiration. My father, distractedly, placed it between his hands, and distractedly read it  and distractedly turned me around, saying to me: from where did you copy it? and then continued to talk in a low voice with my mother about other important and remote things.".   That is all!