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2010年5月19日 星期三

Neruda's Oda a la Sandia (Ode to the Watermelon 聶魯達 西瓜頌).1



I had been occupied with various other subjects as a result of other engagements. It's about time that I get back to my series of Neruda's food poems. This one is the last in the series. It is about one of the biggest fruits one can find, the watermelon. Whenever we think of the watermelon, what would appear to the mind of the ordinary folk would probably be a picture of a dozen wriggly black ribbons with frayed edges converging to the poles of a green basketball with shining skin with or without drops of recently condensed water vapor clinging to its glisteerning surface and its red juicy inside honeycoombed with tens of hard pear-shaped seeds which would melt instantly into delicious sloshes inside one's mouth on a hot summer day. To me, a slice of cut watermelon on the table looks remarkably like a huge mouth bounded by a creamy colored lower lip with green lip gloss widened into a big dismebodied smile But let's hear what Neruda has to say.

 

 Oda a la Sandia                                   Ode to the Watermelon                                    西瓜頌

 

El árbol del verano                              The tree of summer,                                        夏樹

intenso,                                                intense,                                                            熱切,

invulnerable,                                       invulnerable,                                                    莫能損,

es todo cielo azul,                                is the sky all blue,                                            是全藍天,

sol amarillo,                                         the sun yellow,                                                是黄太陽,

cansancio a goterones,                        sweating weariness,                                           是滴滴疲憊 ,             

es una espada                                       is a sword                                                         是小徑上的

sobre los caminos,                                over the paths,                                                  一劍,

un zapato quemado                              a shoe burning                                                 是眾城

en las ciudades:                                    within the cities:                                                燃燒中的鞋:

la claridad, el mundo                            the brightness, the world                                  那光,世界

nos agobian,                                         is pressing on us,                                             正壓迫我們

nos pegan en los ojos                           is striking our eyes                                           正以塵暴

con polvareda,                                     with dust clouds                                               以突如其來的金拳,

con súbitos golpes de oro                     with sudden gusts of gold                                襲擊我們眼精

nos acosan                                            is harassing                                                      以小刺                                         

los pies                                                 our feet                                                            以熾熱的石子      

con espinitas,                                        with little thorns                                               煩擾

con piedras calurosas,                           with hot stones                                                 我們的腳,

y la boca                                               and the mouth                                                  而我們的口

sufre                                                     suffers                                                               比所手指

más que todos los dedos:                      more than all the fingers:                                   更苦:

tienen sed                                              the throat,                                                         喉嚨

la garganta,                                           the teeth                                                            牙歯

la dentadura,                                         the lips and the tongue                                      囗唇和舌頭

los labios y la lengua:                            are all thirsty                                                     都渴:

queremos                                              we wish to                                                         我們渴望

beber las cataratas,                                 drink the waterfalls,                                          飲那些瀑布, 

la noche azul,                                        the blue night,                                                  那藍色的夜  

el polo,                                                  the pole,                                                           那地極

y etonces                                               and then                                                           然後

crueza el cielo                                       crosses the sky,                                                 橫過天際

el más fresco de todos                           the freshest of all                                              是所有行星

los planetas,                                          planets,                                                             最清新的,

la redonda, suprema                             the round, surpeme                                           那圓渾,至高無上

y celestial sandía.                                  and heavenly watermelon.                                和天堂般的西瓜 。

Es la fruta del árbol de la sed.              It's the fruit of the tree of thirst.                         她是口渴樹之果實。

Es la balena verde del verano.             It's the green whale of summer.                         她是夏天之綠鯨 。

 

This is the first part of Neruda's poem on the watermelon. I shall continue with the translations of its second part tomorrow and write my thoughts on the poem, if I have time.

4 則留言:

  1. Interesting and yummy discovery!
    Food poems, food for thought. You're really good at locating unique resourses...

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  2. You really ought to read some of the poems of Neruda. He's fantastically prolific. He can turn just about anything into poetry. Just wait. I'll be translating some of his poems on other most ordinary objects found in a normal home!

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  3. About locating unique resources. Anybody can do so. All they need to do is to...LOOK. This world is a huge huge place, you know. No matter where you cast your eyes, you're bound to discover something of interest.

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  4. 有趣有餘韻,誠品也有出版聶魯達的個人情詩集!
    [版主回覆05/20/2010 07:47:00]thanks for the tip. I have already translated his "Veinte poema de amor y una canción desperarada"  into English and published them in another blog. I was not aware that they had been translated into Chinese. Thanks for the tip. Originally I thought of doing a trilingual edition of those 21 poems later, much as what I am now doing with regard to his poems on food.  But thanks for the tip.  Is 誠品 a Hong Kong, Taiwan or PRC publisher and as far as you are aware, was that Chinese translation based on the Spanish original or an english translation of the Spanish original? And where did you get it? It's so heartening to learn that I am not alone in loving Spanish poetry. If I were to start a Spanish poetry group in Hong Kong, would you be interested to join?

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