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2010年12月22日 星期三

Yu Guangzhong's "Winter Solstice" (余光中的『冬至』)

It's Winter Solstice today. We had an early release of all our staff. But it was not only a release of our staff. It was also my own release. I could comb through the poems of Yu Guangzhong freely again to find something to match the festive sentiment, and go a little way toward meeting a request by one of my fellow bloggers. I found one. It's called Winster Solstice. The poem and the translation follows.


          冬至                                                  Winter Solstice


想了很久都不能决定              Thought a long while but couldn't decide


最別致的一張聖誕卡               How to trim for you


應怎樣來為你剪裁                   A beautiful Christmas card


直到冬至那一天,我說           Until the day of Winter Solstice, I said


對了,便沿著浪花的花邊       Yes, then cut out the spacious seaview of Saichi Bay


剪大西子灣空曠的海景         along the foamy edges of the waves


正面,是今年最短的一日        Yes,  it's the shortest day of the year 


---在壯麗的下端                       ---at the lower end of grandeur


紅艶艶印著一枚夕陽                the red red sunset in print 


反面,是今年最長的一夜        No, it's the longest night of the year


---在寂寞的上端                       --at the upper end of loneliness 


銀晃晃貼著一籤冷月                the silvery silvery chilly moon stuck


而橫在壯麗和寂寞的中間       midway atride grandeur and loneliness.


我的思念是燒煉的晚霞           My thoughts homed in on the burnished dusk


這一切,幾何學最妙的設計   All this, the most subtle design of geometry


天文學最精確的安排               the most precise arrangement of astronomy


直到平安夜的前四天               Was not found until


頓然才發現,卻已經               four days afore Christmas Eve, but oh,


唉,來不及郵寄給你了           it's far too late to be posted to you.


                                                                                           (25.12. 1988)


As stated, this is a creation by the poet on Christmas day of 1988. It's written in an almost colloquial style but not entirely. We can find a whole series of balances and equivalences. But the balance serves only to set into relief the contrasts, the movement of oppositions: postive/negative, sun/moon, day/night, long/short, geometry/astronomy, early/late, Eastern festival/Western festival. The images range from those related to space to those related to time. The language range from the colloquial to the more formal, from prose to prosy poetry.


Have a happy family union whether according to Chinese customs or as a pre-Christmas family reunion!


7 則留言:

  1. Elzorro 今晚食多粒湯丸啦 .. 祝2011 年  事事一切順利開心
    [版主回覆12/22/2010 17:12:00]Thank you. I hope that it will be even better for you. 
    But don't waste too much time with old folks. Life must be lived in the here and now. Go out and rejoice in your youthfulness! It won't be there forever! Live so that you won't have to regret when such regrets serve only to make you feel more miserable!

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    merry christmas~~~~

     
     
     
    [版主回覆12/22/2010 20:53:00]Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year too!

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  3. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! To my dear old friend !  "Winter is here, let's dance...    Is Christmas not far away ? Absolutely!      Here, there and forever every where...       Let's sing along with Christmas , and          Dance with the Happy New Year !" 









    [版主回覆12/22/2010 22:24:00]Thank you so much, my dear friend. I hope you will have a wonderfully warm and happy family reunion at Christmas time, good health for you family and excellent health for your finances in the coming year! But above all, I wish you peace of mind and truckload of love and affection from all those who are near and dear to you!
    And of course, thank you so much for your always interesting poem and video presentations!

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  4. [版主回覆12/23/2010 08:51:00]The sun and the clouds are forever fascinating to me.  Thank you for this video clip!

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  5. 來這裡學英文也不錯, 原來冬至並不是 winter coming 而是 winter Solstice
    [版主回覆12/22/2010 23:51:00]I thought that was taught as part of your geography. I learned that in Form 3!

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  6. Love SuperBro’s video. What a magnificent spectacle! Here is a blessing for all of us who always look forward to our coming days with a heart that’s forever young.
     
    Morning has broken, like the first morning
    Blackbird has spoken, like the first bird
    Praise for the singing, praise for the morning
    Praise for the springing fresh from the word
     
    Sweet the rain's new fall, sunlit from heaven
    Like the first dewfall, on the first grass
    Praise for the sweetness of the wet garden
    Sprung in completeness where his feet pass
     
    Mine is the sunlight, mine is the morning
    Born of the one light, Eden saw play
    Praise with elation, praise every morning
    God's recreation of the new day
     
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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  7. 頓然才發現,卻已經     唉,來不及郵寄給你了   ....
    After reading this sentence, the words came into my mind immedately was "珍惜"
    However, many people only talk about "珍惜" , and don't know how to re-act !
     
    [版主回覆12/23/2010 23:52:00]Timing is all! Too much reflections are as bad as too little!

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